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Andreas
28th March 2003, 14:39
now lets hear some poetry of you guys:
here comes one from DjoDio from laesk.com (its in spanish, but what the hell):
Exista, por mi.
Exista, frente a mi.
Exista, junto al mar
Ondulada y ausente.
Sienta quedar
Flor de carmesÃ*
Siéntese cerca, asÃ*.
Con urgencia urgente
Necesito oÃ*r palabras de beso
Bajo sábanas,
En el aire condensado de hueso
En llanto hidrógenado
De la rosa en el cielo.
En la aurora os espero
Sentado en el velo
Que atrae mi mano
A vuestro techo, en vano,
Pues en el lecho
os espero, llorando.
thetonewrecker
28th March 2003, 15:28
Small studio becomes quicksand
sinking into the mire of wires and cables
can't stay afloat and drowning too fast
holding his lone friend
the bassoon player laughs at my misfortune,
but not long it lasts
plugs find sockets
ideas find paths
sound waves float out
soothing audio hot bath
simplistic to taste, yet complex enough
accoustic no, but more fun than math
phil
28th March 2003, 16:11
gary wilmot stepping up again...
with the waist line twist
all dem girls dem be drinking mana piss
runnin ting proper, lick my bum
your a bent fowking coppa
growing ya carrots boy am de murderer
licking the gravel how be serving ya
bone marrow disease for you... you bum burgler
invisibleplanet
28th March 2003, 20:09
Weekend is here:
Our plans here are to sanctify the garden,
Roam through Parklands of Moore's Metallic Shapes,
Kiss the earth and sing to the sun and
Wander through woods where Steel Orchids bloom.
In vine covered domes of digital birdsong
The lovers seat themselves, and children search
High and low for the hidden source
Laughing when they find embedded wires.
Out in the yorkshire fields it will be
Very easy to forget death and the war;
Easy to remember how precious life is.
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 08:35
children teach
adults preach
governments leach
MUX
29th March 2003, 11:08
..contract breach
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 11:18
..rhyming speech..
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 11:35
poems don't need to rhyme
paint pictures with words
if only this forum
didn't justify every line!
gunjack
29th March 2003, 11:45
with a blackened heart i try desperately to cling to a shred of my own humanity. i am not who i wish i were. please give me some warmth and human contact to remind me who and what i am...... i need to relax
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 11:57
with cyber fingers i lightly brush the hair from your brow
and plant a spirit kiss of light upon each eye
can such an ache be soothed by words alone?
gunjack
29th March 2003, 12:20
luv
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 12:23
originally by gunjack
ip no okaga de boku no kokoro ga atakai
amongst babel's ruins
understanding is lost
we all hang ourselves
from word branches
phil
29th March 2003, 12:44
One more wigga on the run
I just can't handle this, born in the land of the scandalous
Thirteen years of age at the time
Moms is kicking me, I gots to get mine
I load up my strap, map out my plan
Choose my victim, then motherfucker stick him
One more point that got scored for the...
Up to no damn good, understood
Steps is getting low so I gots to get some more
Loads up the K, breaks out the back door
You know the routine, so run fool, here we go
Say back channel, keep your motherfucking hands up on the dash
And gives up the cash
One time is making a move on my arse
But I ain't sweating it cause ain't shit funny
Because it's all for the money
I gots to get mine, so I'm a take yours (Repeat 2x)
gunjack
29th March 2003, 12:48
i am sick of this shit, all these 2 faced muthafuckas on my tip, smiling at me one minute and the next they start to trip. fake for the sake of making flakey assed decisions, and the minute they go down, they tryin to take you down with em. its wack the way they act, talkin shit behind your back, and there is no slack for the simple fact they tryin to keep they fragile little egos intact. simple minded, uneducated, no compassion for they brothas, put em in the crosshairs pull the trigger and send em in a box back to they mothas. i aint havin it, no way, hell no, uh uh forget it, i have worked to hard up to now to let some other fool take all the credit.
phil
29th March 2003, 12:52
Just call me the come up kid
Hard times kicking it in the CM2
So that means I gotta do what I gotta do
And if you ain't down with the phil, fuck you
You're coming up short when I slang
So when I hit your corner, you're gonna be a goner
wigga duck when my nine starts to buck
In it for the snaps so I'm crazy as fuck
I should be laying low cause one time is real hot
Need to make a nine so I rush your spot
And it's like that when I got the philly
If you don't care someone else does the killing
So when you hit the end of the road ain't no turning back
I done signed a hood lifetime contract
Jacking and packing cause ain't shit funny
Because it's all for the money
gunjack
29th March 2003, 13:07
props
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 13:10
cruel words from merrie england's decay!
can we believe in the words you say?
u adopt a creed of vice and hate.
why not turn your anger to the State ?
pitching your battle 'gainst fellow man,
inciting hatred in your brethren.
humanity becomes animal.
we all fightin for our survival!
phil
29th March 2003, 13:18
Invisible Planet, speak when you spoken too....
Uh oh, there goes another beep on the beeper
One time sleep on the fucking night creeper
Trying to show stop on the sales
Pull fake braids but I still gets paid
Just say no? Fuck the TV
Trying to push the shit cause the weight is exceed
See me for the blast, Five-oh fly in fast
Mad cause I'm making more cash than they arse
Now I lay low in the cut
Label me the wigga with the fucking gangsta strut
Every hooptie got gold license plates
my birds fly out throughout the fucking states
Now my other half is telling me I'd better quit
But I ain't through in this shit, so I guess this is it
I'll be dead before I go out like a dummy
whys that phil? Cause it's all for the money
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 13:27
speak only when your spoken to
do to others as they do to u
shut up yersel, u pseudo gangsta
u aint nuthin but a rude wordster
phil
29th March 2003, 13:39
yo Invisible planet
your mum is gigantic
prolly sink the titanic if you were in the artic
living in wakefield, with sayings like "hello duck"
why do u think everyone a duck (are u stupid)
remember at school you used to eat all the tuck,
your dad picking you up, looking like Uncle Buck
aleks
29th March 2003, 13:39
eins,zwei,drei
ich bin auch dabei
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 13:43
vier, funf, sechs
neun und sechzig
liebe ich beste :)
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 14:45
Yoarkshire Folk doan't sah 'Duck'
Arahnd these parts there's nobbut 'Love'
phil
29th March 2003, 15:19
dont kick the pigeon ( a verse from my album)
watch how the pigeon pecks the ground,
why are you watching the pigeon pecking the ground
Is it because his pecks stifle worldly ambition
or is it because he is eating the food you have forgotten
flying off now to sit on a pylon, keeping one eye on his fellow pigeon
with no knowledge of nuclear fission. his head moves in a funny fashion reacting to his environment
the car horns geneticlly programmed in to his system
dont kick the pigeons.
invisibleplanet
29th March 2003, 18:05
crude deal
oil for food
how crude
napalm field
barren yield
DU boom
Iraqi tomb
tsr_tomas
29th March 2003, 19:15
rather have one dildo in my hand, then ten in my forhead.
M H
29th March 2003, 21:04
Nicked Nicked, we've all been nicked
we've stormed number ten with loads of bricks
the pigs have had their fun,
they got to use their guns
and now they're gonna treat us like we're really thick....
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