freestyle rhyme

[Sheridan]

ok this in response to the hip hop II thread. this could be a huge success or a big failure, but I have always wanted to do it here. this is a thread for freestyle rhymes. I will start off with a little verse and the next person add to it. a line or a verse. try to make it ryhme with the last at least once. nothing too long just a few lines about whatever. we can see where it goes from there.

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I can feel a pasion that is moving up through the ether,
Iv'e been fighting like a dog chewing on the bones of man
so now my teeth hurt.
there is change in the air and it is the kings who will stare
as the peasents march in unison
and carry the torch up to the unicorn
and bless its forehead with a newborn....

[pille'ocheoni]

i feel unborn, im torn between my sworn enemy,always about mascalinity,the trinity,they always said keep to the anonimty,bitch i dont drink,i just fell in the sink,now im comin to the brink,denial, that's what they always said my brother,that he was a pedifile,but no,just ask the crow,he watchs the dough,frequently moderating the flow,come on yo,i dont sell blow i just hang out on the corner stow.more and more being brought to the glow.

[Sheridan]

of your iris. it makes my thighs hurt.
running on empty is as close as your flirt.
I am still standing though,
the poison is infecting - my flow in -
to rhythms
caught in the agony of your tragedy..

[pille'ocheoni]

i sorry your majesty,im sure your dynasty will be relefed in your somber,im sure you have ponderd the thought of being fonder of what you cant touch,or see for that matter,open the platter,and youll see the madhatter,and all of his pitter patter,and one day you might feel sadder,news clip, dont walk under the ladder,youll feel gladder-remeber the signs dont fall in those petty crimes and religh on those straight and narrow lines,note:dont trust those time lines ether,let those soles fall as they may and leave it to beaver.......

[7875]

beaver deciever
hack your rhymes with a meat cleaver
and breathe a bit deeper
but most of the time
i only inhale sweet cheeba
i know i gots to quit
but each day delivers more bullshit
and im steady having fits
about the cash flow
there is no
where to go
and how will i know
should i turn right or left
or just go dead ahead
or should i just put head to bed
and sleep it off instead

[pille'ocheoni]

thats what she said,pop the clutch move the tread
on your portable virbrating bed,
i always thought to pop the lock
steel the money leave the dock,tick tock,tick tock
move!
come back to the groove,were coming full circle around the circuit
come on boys and girls jerk it!
its easy,just occasionally be slezzy,
sit back and just take it easy.

[pille'ocheoni]

my thoat hurts its a bit weezy,dont get skeezy,remember sneezy,sleeply,dopey and doc,he kinda reminds me of aesop rock
always pickin up hiphop,at the drop,and showin us new ways to get to the top.
creatively speaking,
officer i swear i wasnt drinking,maybe just a inkling,tinnie tiny bit
or maybe it was the hit
it's always that smoky shit that gets me lit
wispers....
get your kit,and tuck in that lip
dont studder,watch out for that gutter
its slippery and wet,
red light
camoflauge net,flash back before you were born
did you know indians,mastered the art of corn.
flip the switch now your dead,gone covered in red,filled with lead
shit weres my bed,nuff said.

[darnymarfy]

rhyming on message boards is a bad thing.

[pille'ocheoni]

elaborate...

[Sheridan]

aww man that doesn't rhyme!
the cypher is over.:-p

[pille'ocheoni]

take the extra time to smell the clovers,see ive been all the way from denver to dover,and still i seem to keep knocking shit over.see.......
its defently not over till its over.

[invisibleplanet]

'til it's over; like a supanova-
lighten up your sky, tighten up your mind!
when i find restriction, on my diction,
it's a bind, baby, it's a language crime.
if ya don't wanna play, get out the way
who r u to say what's bad or what's good
get back to the hood...

[pille'ocheoni]

yeah you must have misunderstood,its all about positive good.
back up,get out, we dont need no negative clout,inbetween the grout
of your comintary cheeks, listen as the planet speaks
for weeks,
like spoken word that leeks
all over your sneeks.
see were all about being some creative geeks.
keep your comments to yourself
see im all about the silver age an being an elf
makin my mound to the glorious sound
which permeates the ground
like a bounce pass to the rebound
turn around hit the ground
come on down to downtown,uptown,midtown,all around.
take a holiday,and see the newfound noun.